Tuesday, February 13, 2007

The Final Analysis

Walking on the winding road
That stretched endlessly
His footsteps faltered a bit
There was a catch in his knee

He sat down right there,
Having weathered many a storm.
He thought back through the years
At the struggles undergone

He had protected everyone
from mother to siblings;
struggling alone through life
hiding his pain in his work

Youth was a blur - he had
toiled from one job to another;
put himself through college
and made a home for his mother.

Sheltered his siblings from pain
and saw them come up in life;
finally, middle aged he was
when he found himself a wife.

As friend, neighbor, father
he was kind to everyone;
Smoothing people's way
Mr.Protector he'd become

And one day he wondered
'Who is my protector?
A person who would think
that I too may need help?

A person whom I can lean on -
who would do a lot for me...
Is there such a one, who would
live to protect me?'

His wife was his dependent;
Siblings and children were grown;
They were sympathetic to his battles,
but busy fighting their own.

As he lay fighting his last battle
remembering events one by one;
He couldn't help wondering
why Mr.Protector was always alone!

Suddenly the woods cleared
And a blinding light shone through
A voice rang loud and clear -
Son, why the sadness and tears?

A banyan tree needs no umbrella
Nor a roaring lion a protector;
Some are born resilient - by

the design of the maker

The banyan spreads its branches wide -
giving shade to everyone; it
bears the brunt of the elements -
A tree second to none

Spawning other trees - the
banyan is a symbol of strength.
Look closely - and in it you will see
an element of divinity

The roaring lion stalks the forest
Its strength unquestioned;
Walking regally with confidence
Its a symbol of majesty

So arise, my son! And
perceive your full height
Do away with your gloom; for
you've lived an exemplary life
.

So the great tree was laid to rest
Mourned by birds and travelers alike
And the silent forest paid mute tribute
To the passing of the brave lion

16 comments:

Rajavel said...

Beautiful Priyamvada ! A tribute to lone warriors ! who tirelessly shoulder responsibility ! Amny of them dont even sit down to think "who is my protector" ! It just doesnt occur to them that they too might need help ! They keep going on ! CArrying everything and everyone ! As if that is what they destiny is ! May be that is what their destiny is !

Loved it ! Made me think of many a personal heroes and heroines !

Priyamvada_K said...

Cheti,
Thanks. Glad you liked it. I like your "lone warrior" phrase. Borrowed it to use as a tagline on Sulekha. Hope you don't mind :)

Priya.

Anonymous said...

Nice one

Anonymous said...

Very well written. It reminds me of my brother who at the fag end of his life, felt like your lone warrior. I understand how he must have felt. I wish a voice spoke to him to make him feel at ease. Your poem has touched me. Thanks.
MILI

Priyamvada_K said...

Anon,
Glad you liked it. Thank you.

Mili,
Thanks for sharing your brother's story. My father was a lone warrior too, and I have some bittersweet memories of spending his last days with him. The overwhelming feeling was one of helplessness, for nothing could be done. Just stay there and watch him die.

This is not his story per se, but a way to console myself that may be God/Supreme Force might have consoled him in his last moments. There are no definite answers, are there?

Regards,
Priya.

Anonymous said...

Dear Priya,
As i googled for some info, by chance i landed on your blog. The post i landed was the story of mother bird... i loved ur style. I told the inchworm story, abt u and kamala to my 3yr old shreya. she loved the story, now kamala and priyamvada aunty is part of our bedtime story. I hv said that kamala is big sis and she stays at america, and our night is her day.. and she will off to skool and aunty to office. now she is asking me when can she meet kamala... my love to u and kamala. pass there is a little sis for kamala down in india,kerala. take care priya. the posts on ur appa, reminds my appa too.... he also hvng many health problems..sleeping in the open terrace.... cooking in cooker .. were all like my papa's style. something is connecting me to u. if u wish / finds time pen to me rajiks03 @gmail.com

Anonymous said...

Yes Priya...some questions have no definite answers...and we have to live with that.
But you know something? The fact that his child adores him and holds him in such regard itself is a victory.Even though he may be a "lone warrior" his battles were won.
Always love your writing!

rajalakshmi kannan said...

Dear Priya,
How r u? No posts... Howz kamala? I think evrything is fine at ur end. Shreya asks more abt kamala... Kindly do write to me when u find time. Read all posts from your blog, of that some made me cry, some happiness and mixed emotions...my love towards my appa has increased..i hv penned many mails to him...If possible do stay in touch with me.... love to be friend of urs and kamala.
raji,cochin.

Priyamvada_K said...

Anon/Rajalakshmi,
That's very kind of you to think of us. Hope all is well with you and Shreya. Will write a note soon.

Moodsandcolors,
Thanks for saying that. It brings a measure of comfort amidst a lot of ups and downs in mood.

Take care,
Priya.

dharmabum said...

i usually don't unnerstan poetry too much, but this was...in two words -

simple. POWERFUL!

it reminds me of some of the fathers, especially in the context of the indian society. they keep working, doing things for others, and pass most of their lives. like, my dad - every deepavali, he makes it a point to go out n buy clothes for the family. and NEVER once buys anything for himself. i used to find it strange til i started earning, and once that happened, started makin it a point to buy him something too :)

the poem inspires me to be like that. strong, independent and dedicated to the cause of others. thank you!

Priyamvada_K said...

Dharma,
"i used to find it strange til i started earning, and once that happened, started makin it a point to buy him something too :)"

Good for you! The banyan trees amongst us need some care too. Nice of you to care for your father this way.

Priya.

Harish Suryanarayana said...

*Clap Clap Clap* Nice .

Priyamvada_K said...

Harish,
Welcome! Thanks for the appreciation.

Priya.

Anonymous said...

I must admit. you write well.

Priyamvada_K said...

Nilu,
Welcome! Thanks for the appreciation. The way you said it made me smile :) - just the way we would say in Tamil.

Priya.

dharmabum said...

i was just thinking, it would be something to be proud of, to have people mourn our death - i mean, people other than our family and friends...and thankfully, so that we don't have an inflated ego, we'd be dead by then :)